sleepercells000's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Timmy's Giant Sandwich]

6 overall

you know, the animation and wut not was childish... as should be.

nevermind that! what's best is the music selection at the end. aha, i've never felt music so close to my emotion before... it was really an ideal backdrop for your ending <3

[Wilhelm Park]

lullabies r nice when i'm tired.

yes, maybe everything was nice.

but when you have smtn nice, you don't submit it; you'd better outright make it the most perfect fucking thing you can before you submit bc finished things r worthwhile - for you and the audience alike.

sure, maybe you don't sea it as a necessity - maybe you'd instead pass your time with better stories - but all the while your audience watches this and says smtn along the lines of "wow, this is nice. in 3 months...!? 5/10!" and, yes, i can understand the lack of criticism in an average viewer, but for me - if you'd be so kind as to treat me an equal of your audience - this submission proves you to be negligent; it proves your talent too. if you want me to think you've honestly done the best you can, i'll be upset...

heh, try to understand i'm being as motivational as i am an asshole (if your audience would so consider me for my unacceptable ratings&review)... i'm delighted to know you can animate well, but - three months or not - you can do better.

your storytelling, camera, voice, and visuals r fine with me. nonetheless! you should make your animation more dynamic and more fluid. the characters themselves were drawn realistically, but only their faces showed realistic movement. the running scene should have been in-my-face active, but you chose a more tranquil treadmill style, which also upset me :<

finally, your storyline - albeit nothing wrong with the short animation and, therefore, the limitations to develop a real story - could have at least been smtn new. i'm not a fan of cliche]]]]]]]]]]]]]]. it'd just be my dying wish to have you do smtn extravagant.

redminus responds:

lolz r u drunk? I can barely figure out what what it is that displeases you. You think my run cycles and dialogue animation were under-expressive? I can't necessarily argue against that--if you isolate the parts and judge them out of context, anyways--but I stand by my aesthetic choices and feel that for the most part, for what the IDEA is, it makes aesthetic sense and everything is appropriately chosen.

Really though, as a truly great (in my opinion anyways) NG animator and artist spikevallentine often mentions, everything that you do as an animator or artist is really just practice for the next thing, which is in turn practice for the next thing, and so on. This was perhaps the best I could do with the skills I had at the time, but I agree with you that there areas that could be improved upon and I'll be minding those for my next animation.... which should be soon. I hope you'll get a chance to see it, as by the sounds of your review it might be more to your liking.

CYAL8rBAI

[Tron Light Bikes!]

you got the visuals&sounds, but no sensation.

if you were to have things simple, then you needed to at least include a minimap to leave the reader informed of where the lightbikes were going... the entire animation was just flashes of light and sound... the lightbikes hardly moved in the actual animation... and then an end with no sensible build up... hardly the action i'd expect from an actual tron light bike submission.

the animation style was nice... i was expecting a parody, but this suited the tron theme nicely. i liked the transitions from the graphic view to the electronic/video game view.

so even though you were exploring ideas - as you said - you need to keep in mind that if you want this to be a video that others will enjoy, then you'll have to make sure those ideas make sense to others as well.

& don't hide forever... taking risks is better.

[Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire]

noh noh noh

for a song that vibrant, your animation drags behind... which leads me to feel like you didn't put too much effort into this.

the style itself is nice and new to me, but i wouldn't give you the merit since the entirety of this submission is more the idea than the execution...

hence, i'd say you have a great extense upon which to improve; and i mean that with good intentions. some concepts/designs really have a maximum potential that, well, isn't nething special... but yours isn't the case. you can make a lot out of wut you have mind, you just have to actually make it as perfect in the animation as it is in your ideas.

[The Pigpen]

well

trying to tell a master storyteller about his mastery of storytelling with little but inferior literary insight is miserable.

... so i'll just give you a 0 bc nething otherwise would be presumptuous of me, and i want nothing other than to be presumed your admirer.

ah, ... i'm so wet.

SpamClamberton responds:

what a coincidence me too.

[Awesome Chaotix]

i don't like the fact that i like it.

i'd like to sea you go beyond yourself. it's not that your style isn't potent, it's that using the same drug too long becomes numbing...

yes, humor is very personal, so when it becomes a public item it's typical to market for every last cent... nonetheless! inflation is your doom.

i wouldn't be threatening or attempt to change your principles... just a simple request from a simple man. :<

[There She Is!! final step]

a good ending to a good animation.

it shouldn't be like this by itself is better than the other episodes... the episodes together make a cute, enjoyable story. the happy ending, of course, is wut makes us feel refreshed and full of love, but that doesn't excuse us for voting this as best.

i want to use this review to reflect on the good job you've done for the "There She Is" storyline altogether... good job! lol.

[Rise of Alfred]

beauty is skin deep until you cut them open

this is definitely thought out. i don't have ne insults for you.

i can sea the time restrictions your animation style gives you - or otherwise your flash version itself - but i wouldn't say graphic quality is essential to this. in fact, for this particularly it is suiting bc of it's grotesque and undefined entirety. i think that's wut makes it all the better neway. if nething, i'd only be picky about your blood; blood is vital to alfred, so you could have made the blood appear more obscene, but that's nothing for which to take points off.

i really liked your use of different cinematic (should that be wut it's really called) techniques, and your success with dissolving humor into drama.

i'd wish that your other animations were as perfected, or that your storylines were as well developed as in this animation.

[Yule of Krills]

you are so smart and stuff

i like you

[Blush Your Teeth]

i wish you were my dad

you have one of my favorite animation styles.